Monday, October 15, 2012

Not The King

Authors note: This is my cause/effect for Touching Spirit Bear

When Cole was sent to the island and tried killing the spirit bear, the bear attacked him to the point where he was just about to die.  Before he was attacked, Cole wanted everyone to fear him and wanted everyone to think that he was the greatest.  After Cole was attacked by the bear he realized that what he was doing was wrong.  He then wanted to change the way he acted and wanted to be a nice person, but he still has some of his anger inside that he still needs to get rid of.

2 comments:

  1. Great piece I read the book myself and this is exactly what happened but I would suggest going into more detail next .

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  2. Great cause/effect piece , just like Nathan said you might want to go a little bit more into the detail next time.

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