Authors note: This is my point of view redo for language arts. Look at how I explained the point of view of the other characters.
In the book “Touching Spirit Bear” by Ben Mikaelsen there was a boy named Cole Matthews. His point of view was much different in the story then the other characters points of view were. Cole Matthews point of view was dark and mean as the other characters were nice and happy. The point of view from a different person can change the story completely.
In the book “Touching Spirit Bear” by Ben Mikaelsen there was a boy named Cole Matthews. His point of view was much different in the story then the other characters points of view were. Cole Matthews point of view was dark and mean as the other characters were nice and happy. The point of view from a different person can change the story completely.
When Garvey and Edwin dropped Cole at the
island, Cole was furious. His point of
view was dark
and mean. No matter what,
Cole did not want to stay on the island.
He was thinking to himself that he was going to escape the island and
runaway somewhere where no one knew where he was. He tried escaping the island a couple times
but he couldn’t do it. The tides kept
bringing him back. He got even more mad
when he couldn’t escape. He was so mad
that he had to come to the island that he even burned down his shelter and
burned all of his supplies. Then that
night, Cole saw the spirit bear. The
spirit bear stared at Cole and he got angry that the bear didn’t fear him. Cole was so angry at the bear that he tried
killing it. The point of view of Cole is
much different than the others.
Garvey and Edwin believed in Cole. They thought that Cole was able to change his
ways and himself. They thought that the
island was going to be able to change his ways and his point of view on
life. So Garvey and Edwins point of view
was bright and good. They always thought
of the good that can come out of a bad situation. They were very dedicated to the things that
they wanted to do and change. They won’t
stop until they know that their client is happy and that they are not
thieves. Their point of view is much
happier than Coles.
This is why point of view is such a big deal
in a story. If told by other characters
in the story, the story can be much different than if it were told by someone
else ,but since it was told by Cole, most of the book was very dark and
mean. If it were told by the point of
view of Garvey and Edwin, the book would be much happier. This is why point of view is so important.
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